Peer Corrections

Peer Correction 1
I asked my grandfather about the object and reason behind still keeping in box well sill.

Peer Correction 2
My grandfather told that these object had a great meaning for him. The reason is they remind him his adventure when he was young.

Peer Correction 3
600 hundreds years ago an empire ruled the ancient China of Ming Dynasty called Lun Luo who had a rock stamp with his name on it.

Peer Correction 4
At first, she could not see where her family had gone. She got signal from the other side of the massive old-fashioned TV set; she could see a light piercing through the room.

Peer Correction 5
Why do people get dreams when they sleep? I had this doubt when I was young. Then I asked my grandfather about this doubt. He told me that,"people get dreams because mind just can’t blank."

Peer Correction 6

A mother and father decided they needed a break. Thts why they wanted to head out for a night on the town but they worried about their son. So they called their most trusted housekeeper to care about their son. When the housekeeper arrived, the three children were already fast asleep in the bed. So the housekeeper just sits around with children.

Paragraph presentation ( Group -4)

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An art exhibition (News Paper article version)

An art exhibition

An historical art exhibition held on January 10 at Minneapolis art museum. The main theme of that exhibition was to present some ancient piece of art work to art history loving people.There is no confusion that historical evidence attracted us very much and if it is very old one then it get more importance. All those items were very unique. Some of them are hundreds year old. All these items gives some idea about the lifestyle of that time.


The exhibition starts from 10 am and continued till 9 pm. That was a nice gathering of art loving people.There was a discussion corner where people can express their opinion about the exhibition. A French artist expressed his opinion about abot a piece of clothes,"When I first saw it it seems like a simple souvenir to me, my confusion broke when our guide showed us the piece of clothes and told its age. It was about hundred years old. That makes me curious." There was a beautiful wallet that was really attractive. The wallet came from Mongolia. Its beautiful art work proves that once it was used by wealthy people.There was another small sculpture of a moving person. It appears as a symbol of a hurry person who is very busy with his activities. May be it was sign of hardworking people. There was a small black sculpture of a women. The way she standing is similar to pray or wish or some other religious activity. From this sculpture we make a guess that this sculpture may be come from Indian subcontinent. There was a beautiful souvenirs of a boat without sail that indicate the way of transportation in the early rural life. May be it indicates that rural civilization. The most important thing is coin. Couple of coins indicates the development of human civilization and their economic development. Not only these few items over there. There was a beautiful musk that shows the efficiency of art work of earliest generation people.A ruler also caught peoples attention. It seems not too old to me. If it is too old or more than Hundred years of age , we must have to appreciate this invention. We may think a ruler is very simple thing so why we give much credit for it? Reason is ruler is the milestone of measuring . If it not invented on that time we never get such smooth way of measuring today.There are also some evidence that gives us idea about social life.A souvenir of a house displayed. We get a idea of the house look like.We found a small jar that may be used for keeping water . That also indicate social life. All these items gives a idea about the lifestyle of early time.Although it was not a lifestyle of any specific region that helps to find our origin.


Each civilization has there own culture and way of life. Although it is history now but once it was the best creation the age. As time passed we become familiar with modern invention the old one remains in our memory. We should always remember that present never exist without past and these type of exhibition will help people to find his root.

An art exhibition

An art exhibition

An historical art exhibition held on January 10 at Minneapolis art museum. The main theme of that exhibition was to present some ancient piece of art work to art history loving people.There is no confusion that historical evidence attracted us very much and if it is very old one then it get more importance. All those items were very unique. Some of them are hundreds year old. All these items gives some idea about the lifestyle of that time.


The exhibition starts from 10 am and continued till 9 pm. That was a nice gathering of art loving people.There was a discussion corner where people can express their opinion about the exhibition. A French artist expressed his opinion about abot a piece of clothes,"When I first saw it it seems like a simple souvenir to me, my confusion broke when our guide showed us the piece of clothes and told its age. It was about hundred years old. That makes me curious." There was a beautiful wallet that was really attractive. The wallet came from Mongolia. Its beautiful art work proves that once it was used by wealthy people.There was another small sculpture of a moving person. It appears as a symbol of a hurry person who is very busy with his activities. May be it was sign of hardworking people. There was a small black sculpture of a women. The way she standing is similar to pray or wish or some other religious activity. From this sculpture we make a guess that this sculpture may be come from Indian subcontinent. There was a beautiful souvenirs of a boat without sail that indicate the way of transportation in the early rural life. May be it indicates that rural civilization. The most important thing is coin. Couple of coins indicates the development of human civilization and their economic development. Not only these few items over there. There was a beautiful musk that shows the efficiency of art work of earliest generation people.A ruler also caught peoples attention. It seems not too old to me. If it is too old or more than Hundred years of age , we must have to appreciate this invention. We may think a ruler is very simple thing so why we give much credit for it? Reason is ruler is the milestone of measuring . If it not invented on that time we never get such smooth way of measuring today.There are also some evidence that gives us idea about social life.A souvenir of a house displayed. We get a idea of the house look like.We found a small jar that may be used for keeping water . That also indicate social life. All these items gives a idea about the lifestyle of early time.Although it was not a lifestyle of any specific region that helps to find our origin.


Each civilization has there own culture and way of life. Although it is history now but once it was the best creation the age. As time passed we become familiar with modern invention the old one remains in our memory. We should always remember that present never exist without past and these type of exhibition will help people to find his root.

There is no confution that suveniors ...

                                                                                                                                         History in a box

There is no confusion that historical evidence attracted us very much  and if it is very old one then it get more importance. I got a chance to see few of very old historical souvenir in my Eng 191 class. All those items were very unique. Some of them are hundreds year old. All these items gives us some idea about the lifestyle of that time.
                

 It was our writing class. I never expected the opportunity to see some historical souvenir in this class.When I first saw it it seems like a simple souvenir to me. My confusion broke when our instructor showed us a piece of clothes and told its age. It was about hundred years old. That makes me curious. There was a beautiful wallet that attracted me. The wallet came from Mongolia. Its beautiful art work proves that once it was used by wealthy people.I found another small culture of a moving person. It appears as a symbol of a hurry person who is very busy with his activities. May be it was sign of hardworking people.  There was a small black sculpture of a women. The way she standing is similar to pray or wish or some other religious activity. From this sculpture we make a guess that this sculpture may be come from Indian subcontinent. There was a beautiful souvenirs of a boat without sail that indicate the way of transportation in the early rural life. May be it indicates that rural civilization. The most important thing is coin. Couple of coins indicates the development of human civilization and their economic development. Not only these few items over there. There was a beautiful musk that shows the efficiency of art work of earliest generation people.We also found a ruler. It seems not too old to me. If it is too old or more than Hundred years of age , we must have to appreciate this invention. We may think a ruler is very simple thing so why we give much credit for it? Reason is ruler is the milestone of measuring . If it not invented on that time we never get such smooth way of measuring today.There are also some evidence that gives us idea about social life. We got a souvenir of a house. We get a idea of the house look like.We found a small jar that may be used for keeping water . That also indicate social life. All these items  gives us a idea about the lifestyle of early time.Although it was not a lifestyle of any specific region that helps us to find our origin.


Each civilization has there own culture and way of life. Although it is history now but once it was the best creation the age. As time passed we become familiar with modern invention the old one remains in our memory. We should always remember that present never exist without past.

My name is Riasat and this is my firs...

My name is Riasat and this is my first blog.